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A pleasingly personal, if slightly loose, response.
Careful attention to structure and to the way the text explores different viewpoints.
Touches on context, although this needs development.
Some critical views are cited, but needs a stronger critical framework.
For a High Level
- Tighten the argument so that it appears a thought-out and well-directed answer rather than a series of useful and more loosely related insights. (AO1)
- Make more focused reference to historical and literary contexts. (AO3/AO4)
- Sharpen the sense of how a critical perspective shapes the interpretation of a text. (AO5)
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