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D
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Comment
This response generally answers the question and shows an understanding of the whole text. However it lacks coherent structure. Comments could be better supported with references to the text. There is little evidence of comparisons within the text. The examples of alternative interpretations are thin. Limited understanding of context offered. The conclusion needs to refer more closely to the question.
For a C grade
- Use more precise textual detail, including quotations for AO2.
- Refer to context and critical viewpoints in detail for AO3 and AO4.
- Use literary terms, e.g. dramatic irony, farce, metaphor for AO1.
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