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Lower
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Comment
The response is written clearly, and shows a fair knowledge of the text. However, textual references and quotes tend to lack proper analysis. Sometimes the response slips into simple narrative without analysis, and there is little attempt to show how one or more critical approaches could shed light on the play.
To improve the answer:
- Avoid simply agreeing with the statement in the question in an unqualified way (AO1).
- Make sure each point is relevant to the question, and that all evidence is explained (AO2).
- Show how context is relevant to the question, rather than just mentioning it (AO5).
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