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Comment:
This response shows a basic grasp of events and characters, and is loosely directed towards answering the question, with basic awareness of themes and references to linguistic patterning. It shows broad awareness of social context and establishes potentially useful links between the texts. Unfortunately the response shows no awareness of other readings or critical interpretations and so will not gain marks for AO5.
To improve the answer:
- Construct an argument, paying closer attention to the terms of the question (AO1).
- Show more awareness of the text as a written work that uses literary techniques (AO2) which can be read using different critical interpretations (AO5).
- Use close reference not merely to back up points, but to clarify and develop them (AO1).
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