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AO1 An impressively coherent and creatively personal response. In control of materials and of the construction of a persuasive argument.
AO2 Use of quotations has a confidence that reflects an assured grasp of ways in which meaning is shaped in the text.
AO3 Focused and refreshing engagement with historical context.
AO5 Astute and assured reference to critical approaches and the light they might shed on central issues of the text.
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