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AO1 A clear and methodical approach, consistently weighing up pros and cons in a basic but consistent way. Needs to push the analysis further to move it beyond broad observations, but fundamentals of critical reading are in place.
AO2 Broad sense of ways in which meaning is shaped in The Great Gatsby. Closer attention to language and technique would have raised the level of the analysis.
AO3 Makes reference to historical context but critical engagement with it needs further development.
AO4 No connections with other texts in this part of the question.
AO5 This answer is marked by basic yet consistent critical evaluation, which demonstrates awareness of point of view. Doesn't engage with more sophisticated critical perspectives.
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