Examiner's Grade
D
The examiner gave this sample answer a Grade D.
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Comment
The answer shows an awareness of character qualities and of the contrast between the two men. There is some attempt to provide evidence to support comments in the form of quotations but they should be embedded when possible. The answer is quite well structured but expression is often clumsy.
For a C grade
- Show clear understanding of writer’s ideas.
- Provide detailed conclusion which might be a summary of the two men’s qualities.
- Focus more on the playwright’s language.
- Embed quotations.
- Improve expression.
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