Sample Answers - Animal Farm (Grades 9

Examiner's Grade

Grade 7 The examiner gave this sample answer Grade 7.
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Comment

A detailed, thoughtful answer, which demonstrates a clear focus on the question and a very good understanding of the novel. It explores the theme of corruption competently and ideas are clearly expressed and expanded. A range of points is made and supported by relevant examples from the text, which are then developed.

For Grades 8-9

Select specific words and phrases and explain how they achieve their effect.
Discuss how Orwell guides the reader’s sympathies towards powerless characters, such as Boxer.
Write a fuller conclusion, demonstrating a more sophisticated understanding of the novel.