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This is an excellent critique of how Syal presents Meena’s development. There is thoughtful analysis of literary techniques, language and effects. Links have been made between character and themes. A sophisticated range of appropriate vocabulary and expression has been used and sentence structure has pace and variety. The conclusion completes the argument and includes a sophisticated point about narrative technique.
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