Examiner's Grade
Grade 3
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Comment
The answer gives a rudimentary account of the good/evil duality embodied in Jekyll and Hyde. It mentions one other form of duality, the two aspects of science, but does not explore this fully. It makes an attempt to relate the story to context, but not in ways that are appropriate to the question. There is a tendency to tell the story, and to drift away from the question. The language tends to be informal, and the essay does not have a logical structure.
For Grade 4
- Use more formal language and a better-organised structure
- Stick to the question without digressions and always relate context to the question
- Explain the duality between the two types of science more clearly
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