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Grade 6
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Comment
The answer tends to tell the story sometimes, but shows a good grasp of the relationship between Lanyon and Jekyll/Hyde, both here and in the wider novella. The response is reasonably well structured, though wording is sometimes a little informal. Some useful references to context, if occasionally undeveloped.
For Grade 7
- Give more detailed analysis of language and its effects.
- Relate the treatment of science more precisely to the contemporary context.
- Show the effect of what happens rather than just telling it.
- Structure the argument more logically.
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