Examiner's Grade
Grades 8–9
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Comment
This is a convincing essay that makes excellent use of evidence from the text outside the passage, and shows detailed understanding of how language is used to communicate information and create effects. It is very fluent, and expresses some original ideas and insights, relating several key ideas to complex contexts.
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