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Grade 7
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Comment
The answer explores how the character of Lady Macbeth changes throughout the play, exploring the extent to which she can truly be called a villain. Each main point is supported by a quotation, though more careful and specific analysis of language, referring to specific literary techniques would improve this answer. There is a lack of fluency in this response that could be improved for an A* answer.
For Grades 8–9
- Examine the extent to which Macbeth is the true villain of the play.
- Use literary terminology and examine the effects of the writer’s choices.
- Develop a more fluent writing style.
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