Sample Answers - Macbeth (Grades 9

Examiner's Grade

Grade 3 The examiner gave this sample answer Grade 3.
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Comment

This response shows a basic understanding of the character, though tends to discuss Lady Macbeth as a real person rather than as a literary construct. Some quotations are included though these could be explored in more detail. A stronger response would include more confident references to other sections of the play. The expression is especially weak in this answer.

For Grade 4

Focus more on the language of the extract and follow the section chronologically.
Show a greater understanding of the play as a whole, in particular referring to Macbeth and his role as the villain.
Explore the effects of the language choices in this section.