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Grade 4
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Comment
There are some good points here and the viewpoint is clear, but the style is rather informal. Opportunities for close language analysis are missed and there is a lack of technical vocabulary. There is some very basic reference to historical context.
For Grade 6
- Develop the points in more detail
- Focus more closely on the effects of language
- Use more sophisticated expression and include technical vocabulary
- Aim for a stronger conclusion
- Include more reference to historical and social context
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