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Grade 6
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Comment
This is a good response that is generally fluent. Evidence is used throughout and technical language is employed to examine the quotations. Reference to the play as a whole is accurate, though sometimes misses opportunities for more detailed connections. More social and historical context required.
For Grade 7
- More reference to wider social and historical context e.g. role of women
- Continue to explore layers of meaning
- Make links to themes
- Comment on overall structure of the play
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