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How does Orwell use characters and events in Animal Farm to explore ideas about corruption?
Write about:
- what characters say and do
- how Orwell uses these characters and events to present ideas about corruption.
Corruption is important in 'Animal Farm' because Orwell the writer tries to show you how things are meant to be good but go bad for the animals. Things aren’t good for the animals at the start because their farmer, Mr Jones is a slob and a drunk. This is shown when it says: ‘taken to drinking more than was good for him’ And it also says that the cows have not been milked, so this infers that he is not a good owner. So when the animals take over the farm, we think it’s good and that the animals will be happier. We know this because Orwell the writer says: ‘they could hardly believe their good fortune’.
Orwell uses language to tell us that there is corruption on 'Animal Farm'. He tells us that the dogs wag their tails to Napoleon ‘in the same way as the other dogs had been used to do to Mr Jones’. This tells us that Napoleon has become as bad as Jones.
Squealer is corrupt because he lies to the animals and says things they don’t understand to confuse them and make them doubt themselves. Like when he says: ‘You did not suppose there was ever a ruling against beds?’ This is corrupt because we know that Major said they should never sleep in a bed and this was also one of the commandments but the pigs have twisted it and the animals can’t remember that it was wrong.
The worst bit is when Napoelon shouts and the dogs come and kill the animals who have done nothing wrong, when Napoleon ‘uttered a high-pitched whimper.’ This shows us that Napoleon uses his control in the wrong way to terrorise the animals and we feel bad that they are so scared and hate Napoelon for being cruel, like Jones. He is like a ruthless dictator but the animals don’t stop him like they do Jones.